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Tue Aug 14, 2007, 7:22 AM
I wrote this poem in a few minutes this morning. don't think it's as good as the last one I wrote and sent to you few people who look...

It's about a girl who has a relationship with an older guy. Basically it's about what happens through it. XD Weird huh? But I was inspired this morning...I get inspired by very random things. Chickens....people that piss me off.

Well...here it is

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She laughed and she cried
On the inside, she had lived and died

She poured her heart out with her secrets and feelings
Until the one day, he stole her being

She had risked it all
Only to provoke her own fall

No matter how long or how hard she resisted
He made her feel like she actually existed

She had found a reason to smile
Even though they were stretched out-mile after mile

She would tell no on of the feelings the had
Even when everything went bad

She shared his names and feelings for her
With a select few, but to no one it would occur

She had actually returned these feelings to a high degree
And forever more, for never more, would she be free

His emotions grounded her, no allowance to fly
But she did not wish to leave the ground-he was an instant high

She had felt safe around him, like she belonged
But it felt like their meeting was forever prolonged

Then an unfortunate time came, when she could take this no more
Even though he had loved her, she was sick-furthermore

She attempted to drop the ties, to break them
To shake them...

She became negative and pushed herself farther away
For she knew there would come that fateful day...

She intended to keep her promises-keep them all
For his rise was her rise, and his fall was her fall

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Basically this poem means, a girl had a very good relationship with an older man. She felt safe and secure, and would share many many things with him. Then, a time came when them being together became too risky and she tried to push them away from each other...but only for their own protection..mainly for his. She knew she would keep her promises, so she thought this would be ok. Now she only hopes the guy understands that she's still here, watching over him. And no matter how far away he thinks she is, she's feeling everything he is, magnified.

Not bad for an amateur who gets inspired by moosh right XD

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